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INSIGHT

Gang members go after a scientist, after they discover that he has been implanting cameras inside the eyes of convicts before release. They want to discover what is known, and who knows it, along with seeking vengeance for the ones killed that they thought were snitches.

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    1. October 16, 2017, 9:13 pm
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      I am not sure who the protagonist is… one of the gang members or the scientist. What is the struggle or the goal to be accomplished, get revenge, know what he knows, who knows or is to escape and protect himself from the gang.
      Why do they care who knows, what did they do. Hint to it so people understand more and can make a decision as to whether they want to become invested.

      Just a quick 3 minute rewrite to help. Still this doesn’t clearly state who the protagonist is as I don’t communicate a view since I don’t know.

      When gang members wrongfully execute a member for being a snitch, they are on a war path to find the scientist that has been implanting cameras inside the eyes of convicts. He must now fight to survive as they intend to ensure everything dies with him.

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    2. Mary says
      September 18, 2017, 5:31 am
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      i like the concept !

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      asgardian says
      July 20, 2017, 12:53 am
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      This has great potential, but needs a central character. Add another dimension. What if the procedure reveals something seen only momentarily (possibly inside the prison) that could cause major controversy?

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      March 14, 2017, 2:35 pm
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      I like the idea, something kind of different. very cool

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    5. March 8, 2017, 12:52 pm
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      So, who is the main protagonist, the scientist who made such an invasive process or the “criminal” who may want revenge after such a procedure has been done? Who is the main focus?

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