Huggins
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Huggins

A wannabe comic book creator reawakens a catatonic boy with the help of his inventor father and his failure support group.

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    October 18, 2013, 10:41 am
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    Robert –
    Sorry to be tough on your script – I know the feeling; my script was decimated by readers!
    My main problem is I found the story unpleasant. The entire cast crapping themselves? Whoa!
    The story seems to go off in three directions – the zapper, the Failure group and the boy in the wheelchair. The Failure group is a cute idea and I liked those parts the best. You’ve got a lot of good jokes in your script and I think if it had more focus on one story and was tightened a lot it would help. It often felt as if dialogue went on and on when much of it could be cut. Orson Welles once said ‘no movie was ever too short.’
    Watch your grammar and word mistakes – e.g. P13 should read…WILL fall upon you…
    Hang in there and keep at it!

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