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How to Run Away Without Leaving Home

Henry Henderson, a college dropout secretly living in his parents’ attic, must find a way to get a tenant evicted before Thanksgiving break.

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  1. February 17, 2013, 11:42 am

    You have my attention half way through your logline. However, I’m confused instead of amused and wanting to read more. Your first sentence is a great way to capture attention but you must deliver with the final punch line. Please revise your logline to make it have greater impact. Once you have accomplish the logline and developing a script, I would read it. Best wishes to you!

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  2. mikeyz says
    November 27, 2012, 12:23 pm

    I’m looking for a script here but all I’m getting is a logline … am I missing something?
    The logline itself needs clarification for sure.

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  3. Avatar of Zero-Selon-Matthew-Olson
    November 7, 2012, 5:20 pm

    a new tenent? his parents get a tenant in his absence? clarification needed.

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