HELL’S PRISON
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HELL’S PRISON

In a future where capital punishment is abolished, a ragtag group of death row convicts are sent to an abandoned prison where they are hunted by three psychotic, bloody-thirsty inmates. But the game is turned on its head when the daughter of one of the convicts is convinced of his innocence and attempts a prison break.

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    1. Profile photo of james341980
      March 14, 2017, 3:02 pm
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      I thought it was awesome until the very last part about the daughter. does she need to be involved in the prison break? or could they just attempt it themselves. kind of reminds me of running man from back in the day, but overall very cool

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    2. Profile photo of aaronroankramer@gmail.com
      September 29, 2016, 10:29 am
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      Cool! Wild!

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    3. Profile photo of frankshank122209
      August 28, 2016, 6:07 pm
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      pretty cool idea but looked lengthy for a logline

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      cbead says
      February 22, 2016, 12:30 am
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      Good potential here

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      terratoo says
      February 21, 2016, 10:05 am
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      You’re close. Could be a good story.

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    6. leroysm says
      January 26, 2016, 2:04 am
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      Bloodthirsty convicts, wrongfully convicted prisoners–what’s not to like?

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    7. December 18, 2014, 5:36 pm
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      Probably has potential with Zombie mover lovers.

      Sent to an abandoned prison for their crimes, a group of convicts battle blood-thirsty inmates.

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    8. SW63 says
      October 14, 2014, 10:01 am
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      Sent to an abandoned prison for crimes they didn’t commit would make them more heroic (a bit like the A Team!)

      They must battle a malevolent trio of bloodthirsty inmates to … what? save the world? save themselves? Get justice?

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    9. September 19, 2014, 2:04 pm
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      its not easy to imagine how hell’s prison would be , I hope if you got something close enough . good luck .

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    10. Chidi says
      September 7, 2014, 10:58 pm
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      Could be better…

      “A group of (tell us in a word or two more about the convicts) convicts are sent to an abandoned prison (but what happens when they arrive), and must battle a malevolent trio of blood thirsty inmates.

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      August 29, 2014, 12:42 am
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      So the logline kinda sucks…however you may have a good market. Give us something with more punch!

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    12. Zia_Marwat says
      August 25, 2014, 6:17 pm
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      i think its nice idea, is the script ready>

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    13. August 18, 2014, 2:53 pm
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      This sounds like “Death Race” and another movie, I can’t think of the title. It’s been made

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