A Warrior’s Odyssey
Fiona Fick, P.I, ex-marine and homicide detective is a walking trouble magnet either it finds her or she finds it. .
Half Shaved
Vasile, a barber, is waiting, in the empty parlor, for a client – or he doesn’t wait for anything, anymore. While waiting, a client walks in. Is he the one Vasile waited half his life? May be. And, if so, what could happen from that moment on? It’s not a Greek tragedy, although it might just as well be one: is Fate bringing them together, to test Vasile’s mental strength? Or it’s just a coincidence? The tortured Vasile turns, quite subtly, in a torturer, frightening his client.
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Good story!! Would love to see your production.
I thought this script was wonderful. Though it was laid out like a story-board, it was a very interesting read. The characters were well drawn, clear motivations, and very well done. As a short, it works well. If this was filmed, I believe you could find yourself in many great festivals. The ending seem to come pretty quickly, but it works. Your main character has gone through a pretty traumatic event, so it’s understandable. All in all, it was a great script and I really enjoyed this read.
Thanks a lot for your feed back. Actually, I ve already filmed it and I have some hopes about it though I’m not quite sure it could not have been better. Anyway, I ll send it to you, when it will be completed if you give me an e -mail. Cheers, Bogdan.
Sounds like marathon man meets barber shop lol. Good logline, yet a bit confusing. Anyway, interesting.
This was a very good short story. The character “Vasile” I have seen many times in barber shops all over the world. This story could have been any scene in a revenge movie. Well done.
thanks a lot.