Fortune Teller
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Fortune Teller

What should you do, if you could read the next ten years of future of people you meet?The only one you can’t see is yours… Then, if you want to help to change their future, be sure your’re in safety first.

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    1. Profile photo of HiConceptHo
      January 14, 2018, 5:47 pm
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      Kind of confusing logline. In general, loglines should not start with a question. ‘Be sure you’re in safety first?’

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      KentThai says
      December 16, 2017, 9:23 pm

      Thanks for your comment.

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    3. Audreck says
      December 16, 2017, 9:10 pm
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      The logline doesn’t really say much of what the story is really about.

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