Flying High
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Flying High

A cock sure military brat storms his high school’s flight training program to piss off the guys, impress girls and earn his pilot wings.

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    1. SW63 says
      December 24, 2014, 11:14 am
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      High school flight training programme? What high school does this guy go to?

      Don’t really want to root for a cock sure military brat – does he have any redeeming features?
      Is he brought down to earth at the end?
      What’s his hurdle?
      Who’s the baddy?
      What happens in Act 2?
      What happens in Act 3?

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      • toojazzy says
        December 24, 2014, 11:23 am

        There are probably 100 or more many Aviation Technical High Schools in America

        http://www.aviationhs.net/

        http://www.highlineschools.org/raisbeckaviation

        http://www.flair.com/ (This one is a residential high school- a feeder to the Military Academies.)

        All of those questions you posed are answered in the Pilot and 5 episode completed scripts.

        Thanks! I welcome all thoughts, ideas, questions and suggestions.

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        • SW63 says
          December 24, 2014, 11:40 am

          OK – make it clear in the logline!

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          • toojazzy says
            December 24, 2014, 11:47 am

            It says a high school flight training program….what isn’t clear about that? High schools have plumbing, electrical and medical and similar programs. What about the log-line isn’t clear that its a high school aviation program?

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      1rainman1 says
      November 30, 2014, 2:50 pm

      It sounds like a fun premise. Thumbs up.

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