Fear
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Fear

A distressed teen haunted by the physical beings portraying her depression and suicidal thoughts. The young girls horrifying journey through her day to day life dealing with Society’s growing ignorance and abuse will either end happily or horribly.

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    1. Profile photo of qazifabiahoq02
      August 31, 2017, 12:08 am
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      This would be interesting! I have written almost similar story, would love to read yours!

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      August 27, 2015, 1:07 pm
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      Ok so we know what’s at stake Her life. That’s good. And we know who the antag is: the “physical beings portraying her depression” Now try to put it all in one sentence, it forces you to cut unneeded info.

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