Denizen Part II
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Denizen Part II

5 years after defeating the Sol Federation, Salvatore Pasquale and ARCUS are plunged into a conflict against DIVIETO – a group of authoritarian extremists composed of humiliated authority figures.

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  1. hingylingy says
    December 26, 2013, 11:00 am
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    Well, it sounds interesting but you are leaving a lot to chance as it is a part II, what gives you the assurance that we are all intimately aware of part I?

    Please write your log line as a stand alone, I assume we can all gather something from this but it begs too many questions at this point and needs a clearer perspective.

    Jay

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  2. belw says
    November 13, 2013, 7:09 pm
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    I don’t really get it, but I’m no expert

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