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Complicit Love

Rob finds his true love while robbing a bank. Their love grows along with his ill-gotten finances. Marriage seals their love; a bullet separates it.

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  1. mikeyz says
    November 12, 2012, 2:19 pm
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    I’m a sucker for these kinds of crime thrillers … and this one did not disappoint.
    I didn’t see the mob angle twist coming – the whole “stealing from those who steal themselves” was done in an intriguing and believable manner. The criminal dating his victim was reminiscent of “The Town” for sure but I see you have acknowledged this in your description.
    The only thing that doesn’t stick well with me is how easily Alise – a seemingly genuine girl – was so quickly lured into this criminal activity herself after finding out about Rob’s true identity.
    Her apparent excitement about paricipating in a robbery with Rob was a little bizarre to me – that’s all I’m saying.
    Overall – I was thoroughly entertained and intrigued with this script!

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    • rickemg says
      November 28, 2012, 10:57 am

      Thanks for your comments mike. It’s a story that has been stuck in my head for awhile. Robs acuity in disguises lets him be personalities which are amenable to his purposes.

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