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A man’s search for God begins to corrupt his soul.

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      BruceD says
      July 5, 2015, 9:00 am
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      There needs to be details here.

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    2. December 18, 2014, 5:32 pm
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      The tagline seems incomplete. How does he respond… what’s at stake?

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    3. SW63 says
      October 14, 2014, 9:45 am
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      As…?

      This is only half a logline. How is the Man flawed? Why is he searching for God? What is waiting for him at the end of the dark path?

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    4. Ecila says
      September 7, 2014, 5:21 pm
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      Sounds interesting, but it needs somewhat more of an explanation as to what this man is facing.

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