Building a nation
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Building a nation

A Jewish man watches the news on tv about another bloody day in the middle east. He then reads an article about a man made island outside the coast of Dubai. Laying on the sofa he later puts one and one together and comes up with the idea to build an island for the Jewish people outside the coast of the USA.

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      toglu4 says
      February 27, 2017, 3:34 am
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      haha hilarious. will watch it.

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      Pasquali says
      July 15, 2015, 5:34 pm
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      This would be way too controversial to get past the studios. Plus, I don’t see who the intended audience is. Sorry, but I just don’t get it at all.

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      Elijahd says
      April 19, 2015, 4:42 pm
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      Some really good potential

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    4. toojazzy says
      December 31, 2014, 5:46 pm
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      Good start, might want to add a goal/conflict and what’s at stake…

      A Jewish American fed up with the bloodshed in the middle east, approaches the Knesset. about relocating Jews to a tropical island near the USA. But will this move even help the cultural discord among the waring factions that go back a millennia ?

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