Black Trash
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Black Trash

Ryan Bennett, a 21 year old community college student/full time convenient store employee hates the life he’s living in Moreno Valley, CA. He’s tired of being introverted, tired of not living life, tired of not having sex with girls, tired of being treated like he doesn’t matter, and tired of being a loser. Ryan ends up committing a crime against his former boss and ends up getting away with it. After committing the crime, Ryan feels alive and awake. Ryan then decides to leave Moreno Valley and start a new life Los Angeles. While in Los Angeles, Ryan gets a job as an escort driver and then ends up joining the porn industry three months later when business slows down for his escort job. For the most part, things are going well for Ryan, but is this what he truly wanted out of life?

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      HarveyFran says
      November 3, 2017, 8:38 pm

      This is more of a synopsis than a Log line but overall I liked the beginning until you got to the part of him becoming a porn star and escort.Don’t take this as negative because you have potential.

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    2. March 8, 2017, 2:21 pm
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      This is interesting liner notes/synopsis one would see on the DVD, but this isn’t quite a logline. I would boil this all down into a single sentence, describing the hero (no proper names needed), the inciting incident (hook) that sets him off on his journey, his goal, what’s at stake and who/what is out to stop him. Cheers and happy writing!

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      Xaleber says
      December 10, 2016, 9:15 am
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      This would make a terrific film! Cheers!

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      November 25, 2016, 7:52 pm
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      This sounds like a good erotic story but the synopsis is incomplete and needs more work.

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      damiencage says
      November 18, 2016, 2:13 pm
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      good stuff

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      November 17, 2016, 12:12 am
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      Hi.
      Just a tip-I think loglines are generally supposed to be much shorter, but I am very interested in your story idea. I want to know what happens to Ryan.

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        ChimaIdigo says
        November 24, 2016, 9:20 pm

        I actually have the story written, but it’s not in screenplay format and there’s a shit load of inconsistencies for setting and dialogue. When I mean a lot, I mean a lot lol… It’s basically a big idea for a screenwriter to look at and turn it into a screenplay. Just giving you a heads up if you’re still interested in reading it. If so, I’ll send it to your e-mail.

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