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Billie

The sudden death of the King of Pop reunites three friends who find themselves on a wild hunt for the infamous Billie that sealed their bond twenty-six years ago. Without it, their friendship may never be the same.

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  1. aweiss says
    December 14, 2014, 3:44 am
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    This is wonderful, sweet and funny. Everything is so real, and a model of simplicity that manages to say much more than what’s on the surface.

    There are a few typos, the structure rambles a bit, a camera angle that needs to be done away with, they’re no nos wirth a spec script. Bille could be aluded to a bit earlier, since he’s so important, and the only other thing is that the songs have to be taken out. That’s also a no no in a spec script, let the music director worry about music, spec scripts tell a story. Just say rap or pop, and that will be enough. I know the songs are really important, but this script is too good to be flagged for a newbee error.

    I hope this script gets made. You write really well. I don’t read thse type of screenplays too often, and smile when I do.

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