better the devil you know
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better the devil you know

About a young woman who gets married to a wealthy man. She starts getting strange calls. harassing letters, pictures being took of her. Police have no idea who it is her partners family try helping. Her mother-in-law is really supportive towards her. She ends up hiring a private eye who traces it back to her mother-in-law.

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    1. Dartistman says
      January 21, 2016, 7:21 pm
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      I love the title but and it could be a great film but the logline is too long it gives a synopsis not a tease to curiosity. I was really hoping it to be a great line after reading the title but it really too much info

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    2. March 26, 2015, 9:08 am

      Sorry Lori it was 2 am in London when I wrote this and my cockney came through lol. What would you do to make it better ??
      thanks
      pearl

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      March 23, 2015, 7:55 am
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      Log line is way too long. You basically tell the entire story. Pictures took of her is not correct English.. Sorry, this really does need work.

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      March 22, 2015, 9:45 pm
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      Really good…especislly the suspense of it getting traced back to the mother-in-law!

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