As life goes by
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As life goes by

They say your life flashes by just before you die.

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      Fivetone says
      April 17, 2016, 3:05 pm
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      Curious for sure, great hook

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      pdhorse says
      February 22, 2015, 9:51 pm
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      Challenged my inquisitive nature… Post synopsis…. Cheers

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    3. SW63 says
      October 14, 2014, 8:23 am
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      Hooked – but want to know more about the story.

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    4. Ecila says
      September 7, 2014, 5:32 pm
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      It certainly is interesting, reminds me somewhat of the Lovely Bones. Good luck with it, I think this short idea could make it as a movie with the right audience.

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      August 25, 2014, 4:27 pm
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      They say? Who’s they and how does this introduce a film?

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      LesaSmalls says
      August 20, 2014, 2:57 pm
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      Short, sweet and to the point. I like!

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    7. TGVSpeed says
      August 18, 2014, 9:57 pm
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      Change a word or two and you have a winner. Completed script?

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      • August 19, 2014, 8:21 am

        Thank you. It is complete, but it is a short story not a feature. Thanks again.

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        leeoconnor says
        August 25, 2014, 4:16 pm

        I agree with this comment. Will you be posting your short?

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        • August 25, 2014, 4:50 pm

          I can’t post it yet. I have a producer reading it currently. If he rejects it, I will post it.

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