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Alone in the dark

It’s a different horror screenplay with a fresh and exciting story. It’s about a demon that steals people of the city and takes them to a dark world and . This is a horror film that it will have three parts.

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    Cedar1994 says
    August 21, 2017, 1:25 pm
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    The screenplay has such bad grammar that I just couldn’t get through a quarter of the first scene. I am unable to give a whole review, because the grammar got to me, I can’t give many stars. I give honest reviews, good or bad, and this is one of the bad ones. you should probably get someone to proofread and edit, before entering into a contest.

    sorry.

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