Admission Impossible
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Admission Impossible

Billionaire party animals and life-long frat buds who go to war with each other when they learn that their kids are competing for the last spot at their beloved ‘Barvard U’ and will do whatever it takes to get their kid in…and keep the other kid out.’

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  1. March 27, 2013, 4:01 pm
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    I see the humor in the script.

    I just feel that a lot of it doesn’t hit home, because the characters, mainly the parents seem so vain, and out of this world cartoon like without any real explanation as to why they’re like this.

    Just a hint of how these parents adopted these personalities to begin with and I’d connect more with them and the humor that comes from them.

    Other than that, I definitely see potential in this, when written to its highest level, I see Will Ferell and his pal, forgot his name, playing the fathers.

    I too am a fan of all kinds of comedy. It just has to have a hint of sense behind the characters that do these funny things.

    Good luck!

    Ron

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