Abyss
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Abyss

The Earth’s crust is now lacerated by hurricanes and man has taken refuge at the bottom of the oceans. The survivors will have to live with the creatures of the abyss. The underground tremors make precipitate the submarine by Emily where Emily lives into the Mariana Trench.

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    1. March 8, 2017, 2:25 pm
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      This is interesting liner notes/synopsis one would see on the DVD, but this isn’t quite a logline. I would boil this all down into a single sentence, describing the hero (no proper names needed), the inciting incident (hook) that sets her off on her journey, her goal, what’s at stake and who/what is out to stop her. Cheers and happy writing!

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      geeart1 says
      December 21, 2016, 9:31 pm
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      Nice, but is missing something!

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      December 7, 2016, 5:28 pm
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      Forgot to give a star rating with my previous comments,keep up the good work Aessandra.

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      December 5, 2016, 6:27 pm

      I like the logline hook and overall story potential Alessandra, you have a vivid imagination like myself, check out my “Space Race 3000” concept sometime..Mike

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    5. Salena17 says
      December 3, 2016, 5:06 pm

      great plot

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      Alessandra says
      November 30, 2016, 5:29 pm
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      asphyxiafilm.weebly.com

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