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A Female on the Males’ Planet

A BEAUTIFUL FEMALE TIME TRAVELLER LANDS IN A FUTURISTIC WORLD WHERE ONLY MALES LIVE AND AS THE MALES ANNIHILATED ALL OF THE FEMALES 300 YEARS AGO TO RID THEMSELVES OF THEIR FEMALE DICTATORS ONCE AND FOREVER, THEY FIND HER A SUBJECT OF FEAR AND A VERY DEFINITION OF ENEMY.

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  1. bicylord says
    September 29, 2016, 6:34 am
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    Just read the first page and I’m interested in this story. The character “Bastian” has prospects. From skinny dude to macho… lol… This will make an interesting movie. I’m keen to see how it plays out on screen. The dialogue is good. But can be worked on. Get rid off the excess lines. Keep it to two or three lines if need be. Let the dialogue be succinct and witty.

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