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4th and 20

After shitting his pants during the middle school football championship in front of all his peers, former quarterback Max Suave turns to self-medication through marijuana during his high school years, but after the starting high school quarterback is hurt, Max finds himself back in football. To win over the girl he loves, and make his dad proud, Max must play the sport that embarrassed him, and turns to some magic weed to do so.

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      lindanas says
      July 23, 2016, 8:49 pm
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      It is kinda long but sure is interesting !

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      MarsAlien says
      August 15, 2015, 9:28 pm
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      And in one sentence?

      If you can’t fit this whole thing into one sentence, with all the important details included, then you lost. Too much backstory information for a logline, the name is irrelevant, and there’s repetition. Also, I’m not sure if by ‘magic weed’ you mean weed with special powers, on a supernatural level, or just weed. Clarify.

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