1601
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1601

An inquisitor travels to England’s first North American colony to investigate a murder but finds it mysteriously abandoned with clues pointing to a malevolent Native American artifact that the colony’s owner plans to bring back to England. (Updated: May 10, 2013)

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    tikiman says
    April 24, 2013, 3:03 pm
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    The grammar and spelling errors kept me from focusing on content. The “traps” in the tunnel were too reminiscent of an Indiana Jones film. I thought your character development was the best part and shows promise.

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  2. March 28, 2013, 6:53 pm
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    As a writer, I like your style. You write in a cinematic way for sure.

    The concept however you chose to write upon just doesn’t gather much interest from me. There just isn’t anything original about it. It’s like another zombie movie, that just so happens to take place in 1601…where in this time it’s much boring than current times as it is.

    I can tell you have worked hard on this and it shows, for the way you describe everything that goes on is well thought out and perceived, but once again originality of some sort is being begged.

    When I think of older movies, maybe not taking place as early as 1601, but nonetheless old, there’s usually an original idea or very fascinating one, such as Frankenstein, Pirates of the Caribbean, etc. Historical Fantasy movies such as these are perhaps something you’re aiming for?

    However, I’d be interested to read more of your scripts, because I truly believe you to be a talented writer, I’d just like to see you tackle a more original concept or perhaps strengthen the story.

    Ron

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