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  • Member Since: September 19, 2014

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Comment on Remote Access This is a classic story of a detective falling for a criminal. Add something unique to the story that…
Comment on Parallel Actions Is he African or African American? Does it take place in an African Country, America or some place else.…
Comment on Storm Dragons Good, very good. The writing created pictures in my head...wild, loved it
Comment on REMATCH I agree with Rutger...I tried to pick apart something.....for constructive suggestions of course...and I can't really find anything to improve…
Comment on Pandorah's Box You're not supposed to rate your own story! That is for your colleagues to do.
Comment on Day Like Night Good story...poetry was a bit much to consume and still follow the story. I love shorts, you can condense…
Comment on RainClouds You could add an additional 5 pages and really bring the short out. Imagine this being actually filmed with…
Comment on The First Days Of Spring I agree with others about formatting but...nice story concept. Get the red pen out and do a little…
Comment on The Ark GOOD PUNCH! I love it! Great potential...seems like something James Cameron would do. You may want to…
Comment on Abbey Road Not enough information. If I were a young producer (20s) or a production company from overseas....I may not…