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  • Member Since: August 1, 2014

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Posted on August 1, 2015

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Comment on Delilah and the fall of Samson Also, Raymond, in my experience I find that one way to get around being bad at pitching is to ask…
Comment on Delilah and the fall of Samson Hi Raymond, I can't argue with anything you've said. I thought the purpose of this forum was…
Comment on Delilah and the fall of Samson Hi raydavenport, You come across as an experienced writer and you write good logline critiques but you've…
Comment on Diner 20/20 Agree with the other comments.
Comment on Forget Everything You Know My definition of a logline? An intriguing character engaged in a compelling struggle. My favourite logline:…
Comment on SIN'S WAGES So, you didn't like my review and you went looking for my logline and attacked it as payback? Excellent work.…
Comment on Scroll Back This is a concept. A logline needs a character and a struggle. It's not rocket science.
Comment on Scroll Forward This logline still needs more work.
Comment on The Credit Bureau So, now I get it. You hated my review even though it's the truth and rather than rework your logline…
Comment on Below the Earth This is an idea for a movie. A logline describes an intriguing character engaged in a compelling struggle. Producers tend…