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  • Member Since: February 28, 2015

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Posted on March 23, 2015

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Comment on The Bigger Story Thanks for the notes, I always get a little lazy with that stuff. What did you think of the script?
Comment on The Bigger Story Thanks for reading!
Comment on 2014 ScriptFest Winners Announced And the prizes were what this year?
Comment on LEVELHEAD Hard to tell much of anything from that logline, but I like the title!
Comment on Romantic surgery As interesting as this sounds, it still needs to be put into a more colorful form. "A young couple surgically…
Comment on L.A .Miles Not a bad start, but the logline seems to be missing a hook. What you have right now is a…
Comment on The Quiet Corner You may want to try to not explain the plot so much since you're going for a high concept pitch.…
Comment on The Bigger Story An early version of "The bigger Story" was entered in every major contest last year and only made the quarterfinals…
Comment on Bee Gone This script has many problems. The most obvious being that the characters have no life and the reader has no…