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Comment on Night at the Biscayne Motel I did contact contest admins; hopefully they'll be able to update my grammar rating to three stars...…
Comment on Wake Up Evil Angel I'm a fan of "we've disturbed something in the woods we shouldn't have, now all hell is breaking loose!!!"-type movies.…
Comment on Night at the Biscayne Motel p.s. my estimation of the grammar was a bit harsh. I'll try to contact an admin and get it…
Comment on Night at the Biscayne Motel You've got a setting with a lot of potential. The story moves quickly. It's a fast…
Comment on Templar Odyssey A big kerfluffle and a bunch of running about. Perhaps gunfire! Rustling of documents, digging of holes, breaking…
Comment on Riverhorse I'm a sucker for animal stories, even when it seems, as in this case, that it's an animal that will…
Comment on Noir This might as well have been "Random Police Procedural, The Movie". I don't mean this unkindly, this is just…
Comment on Lapin This is a relatively low-scoring logline, but I do glimpse the story behind it. And that story does have…
Comment on Empire of the Undead This is a really cool idea (thus the Hook score) swamped by too many words. It is not a…
Comment on Blood Sucking Lawyers The stakes (stakes--vampire--never mind) are not high enough for me in this logline. Unless there's some consequence to the…